Message346145
"making" looks fine to me as a native English speaker. I'm not sure it's properly correct English, but it's fine colloquially and I don't think "make" would improve it :)
If anything, I'd change "to" to "toward", or possibly replace "an eye to" with "the goal of". |
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2019-06-20 17:32:47 | zach.ware | set | recipients:
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2019-06-20 17:32:47 | zach.ware | link | issue37352 messages |
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