Message265006
This is my first reading of this doc. The formatting improvements look good. A definite enhancement.
Review contains a few comments. My main difficulty is separating creation of a proxy instance from use of a proxy instance. Some of the creation parameters govern the use, and hence do not make must sense until one reads the instance description a few paragraphs further on.
Perhaps the initial sentence "A :class:`ServerProxy` instance is an object that manages communication with aremote XML-RPC server." should be expanded into a paragraph with some of the description given later. |
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2016-05-06 18:43:09 | terry.reedy | set | recipients:
+ terry.reedy, effbot, docs@python, serhiy.storchaka |
2016-05-06 18:43:09 | terry.reedy | set | messageid: <1462560189.4.0.317009490977.issue26889@psf.upfronthosting.co.za> |
2016-05-06 18:43:09 | terry.reedy | link | issue26889 messages |
2016-05-06 18:43:08 | terry.reedy | create | |
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