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Sounds very good to me.
One small thing: in the first para of "Audience", there's a "talk down them" which looks funny to me in this word order.
One question: I could imagine wording like "this is rarely needed" instead of "this is experts only" -- would you say it will be effective in making people think if they really want to do that? |
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