Message111568
FWIW, I like the new patch better, but still have a few nitpicks:
- Starting a sentence with an argument name is a bit awkward because that makes a sentence that starts with a lower case letter.
- There is an extra space in :class: `list`.
- It would make more boring prose, but I would prefer to see similar language used in each alternative. I.e.
- To concatenate ...
- To concatenate ...
- To add ...
- Why "an *iterable* of iterables" but "a *sequence* of strings"?
- I am not sure it is correct to say "to concatenate an iterable", I think it should be "to concatenate items from an iterable." |
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2010-07-25 22:52:59 | belopolsky | set | recipients:
+ belopolsky, georg.brandl, rhettinger, terry.reedy, ezio.melotti, docs@python, lvogt |
2010-07-25 22:52:59 | belopolsky | set | messageid: <1280098379.18.0.284065284287.issue7447@psf.upfronthosting.co.za> |
2010-07-25 22:52:57 | belopolsky | link | issue7447 messages |
2010-07-25 22:52:57 | belopolsky | create | |
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