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Title: Poor grammar in asyncio TCP echo client example
Type: Stage: resolved
Components: Documentation Versions: Python 3.4, Python 3.5
process
Status: closed Resolution: fixed
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Assigned To: docs@python Nosy List: Aaron1011, asvetlov, docs@python, vstinner
Priority: normal Keywords:

Created on 2014-07-22 16:51 by Aaron1011, last changed 2014-07-23 08:50 by vstinner. This issue is now closed.

Messages (3)
msg223673 - (view) Author: Aaron Hill (Aaron1011) * Date: 2014-07-22 16:51
The last sentence in the explanation of the TCP echo client currently reads: 

"At run_until_complete() exit, the loop is no more running, so there is no need to stop the loop in case of an error".

The grammar should be improved to something like "...the loop is no longer running", or "...the loop has stopped running"

The current documentation can be found here: https://docs.python.org/3/library/asyncio-protocol.html#echo-client
msg223728 - (view) Author: Andrew Svetlov (asvetlov) * (Python committer) Date: 2014-07-23 08:29
Fixed in d19c58e13ac9
Thanks
msg223729 - (view) Author: STINNER Victor (vstinner) * (Python committer) Date: 2014-07-23 08:50
Thanks for the patch Aaron. I wrote the documentation and I'm not a native english speaker. Please don't hesitate to report other grammar issues like that. You may group all of them in a single issue.
History
Date User Action Args
2014-07-23 08:50:26vstinnersetnosy: + vstinner
messages: + msg223729
2014-07-23 08:29:25asvetlovsetstatus: open -> closed

versions: + Python 3.4, Python 3.5
nosy: + asvetlov

messages: + msg223728
resolution: fixed
stage: resolved
2014-07-22 16:51:51Aaron1011create