Message257779
The wording looks good in spirit. I just have a couple nits to pick with the grammar:
* Why change from “See” to “Refer”? “Refer to” would work better I think; but “See” was fine too IMO.
* I think it is better without “document”. Just “See / Refer to <2.3 MRO> for details”.
* I would insert “the” in “since the 2.3 release”. |
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2016-01-08 21:12:49 | martin.panter | set | recipients:
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