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Your formulation is more concise, thank you.
I suggest dropping the word 'additionally'. Also, "how it does" would be better phrased as "how it changes", I think. (It really should be "whether and how it changes", but in deference to Anatoly's 'advanced English' comment I'm willing to let that imprecision slide). |
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