Author rhettinger
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Date 2011-04-26.22:32:41
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The section heads should remain in title case.

The colon in the octal escape section should remain, but the "If" following it should be lower cased.

"Phonebook" should remain a single word.

"vs" is fine without the period in a section head.

It would be better to replace all of the "e.g." and "i.e" with "for example" and "such as".
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