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Suggested edit to Python Tutorial - Section 4 #82085

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lrnormiegmailcom mannequin opened this issue Aug 21, 2019 · 8 comments
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Suggested edit to Python Tutorial - Section 4 #82085

lrnormiegmailcom mannequin opened this issue Aug 21, 2019 · 8 comments
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lrnormiegmailcom mannequin commented Aug 21, 2019

BPO 37904
Nosy @ericvsmith, @miss-islington, @verhovsky, @umoqnier
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  • bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 #16169
  • [3.8] bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) #16234
  • [3.7] bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) #16235
  • [2.7] bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) #16236
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    lrnormiegmailcom mannequin commented Aug 21, 2019

    Suggest amending the text of the first sentence in Section 4, from:

    "Besides the while statement just introduced, Python knows the usual control flow statements known from other languages, with some twists."

    to:

    Besides the while statement just introduced, Python follows the usual syntax fir control flow statements known from other languages, with some twists."

    @lrnormiegmailcom lrnormiegmailcom mannequin added the 3.7 (EOL) end of life label Aug 21, 2019
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    I think I'd prefer "... Python uses the usual flow control statements known from other languages ..."

    It's not just syntax, after all.

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    umoqnier mannequin commented Sep 15, 2019

    I'm interest on this for my first contribution :D

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    New changeset b574813 by Miss Islington (bot) (Diego Alberto Barriga Martínez) in branch 'master':
    bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169)
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    New changeset 7a2f687 by Eric V. Smith (Miss Islington (bot)) in branch '3.8':
    bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) (GH-16234)
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    New changeset 8b907a8 by Eric V. Smith (Miss Islington (bot)) in branch '3.7':
    bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) (GH-16235)
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    New changeset c47c8ba by Eric V. Smith (Miss Islington (bot)) in branch '2.7':
    bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) (GH-16236)
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    verhovsky mannequin commented Sep 24, 2019

    You changed "control flow statements" to "flow control statements", which is an unrelated concept.

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