msg101614 - (view) |
Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 01:43 |
http://docs.python.org/py3k/howto/webservers.html
The path to the interpreter in the shebang (#!/usr/bin/env python) must be currect.
Sorry man there are a great many distractions here.
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msg101615 - (view) |
Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 01:46 |
In same file, "intermangled with Python” and it has a “Publisher” which destignates"
intermingled?
designates?
Thanks, Dave.
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msg101616 - (view) |
Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 01:48 |
"Another problem ist the basic concept"
is
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msg101617 - (view) |
Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 01:53 |
much easier as is is specially designed
more easily and is especially designed
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msg101618 - (view) |
Author: Ezio Melotti (ezio.melotti) * |
Date: 2010-03-24 01:55 |
Some more typos:
"The benefit from this approach is that WSGI applications can be deployed much easier as is is specially designed to host WSGI applications"
s/is is/it is/
"Pylons is much like TurboGears with ab even"
s/ab/an/
Once you finish reading it I'll fix them all at once.
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msg101619 - (view) |
Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 01:55 |
There is a number of middlewares
are
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msg101620 - (view) |
Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 01:57 |
you can rely an already existing
rely on an
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msg101621 - (view) |
Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 02:47 |
There is an incredible number of frameworks
s/is/are/
The majority of users is best
s/is/are/
o work together as good as possible.
s/good/well/
jects can be saven in a st
s/saven/saved/
Thank you. I'm through for now.
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msg101628 - (view) |
Author: Martin v. Löwis (loewis) * |
Date: 2010-03-24 08:20 |
David, can you provide these changes as a unified diff against the subversion trunk?
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msg101639 - (view) |
Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 15:45 |
I apologize for the noise.
Yes, I'll read the article carefully and provide changes as a unified
diff against the subversion trunk.
On Wed, 2010-03-24 at 08:20 +0000, Martin v. Löwis wrote:
> Martin v. Löwis <martin@v.loewis.de> added the comment:
>
> David, can you provide these changes as a unified diff against the subversion trunk?
>
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> nosy: +loewis
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> _______________________________________
> Python tracker <report@bugs.python.org>
> <http://bugs.python.org/issue8218>
> _______________________________________
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msg101781 - (view) |
Author: Ezio Melotti (ezio.melotti) * |
Date: 2010-03-27 00:54 |
See also #8234 that has a patch with some rephrasing too.
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msg101884 - (view) |
Author: Ezio Melotti (ezio.melotti) * |
Date: 2010-03-29 03:34 |
Here is a patch that fixes the typos found by David and Yuv and rephrases a couple of parts.
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msg101895 - (view) |
Author: Éric Araujo (eric.araujo) * |
Date: 2010-03-29 16:24 |
s/framewors/frameworks/g
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msg101896 - (view) |
Author: Éric Araujo (eric.araujo) * |
Date: 2010-03-29 16:34 |
The rest of the patch seems good to me. Note that “the majority of users is” is as correct as “the majority of users are”, choosing one is a matter of preference.
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msg101897 - (view) |
Author: R. David Murray (r.david.murray) * |
Date: 2010-03-29 16:42 |
'is' may be technically correct, however it will sound wrong to a native speaker's ear, at least in America.
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msg101903 - (view) |
Author: Martin v. Löwis (loewis) * |
Date: 2010-03-29 20:32 |
It seems that a lot of non-native speakers (of English) are participating in this thread. By nature, this is something that native speakers should resolve. Unless I'm mistaken (and Ezio actually *does* speak English as a first language), I propose that one of the native speakers provide a patch (perhaps based on Ezio's patch), and that all non-native speakers abstain from commenting on what they believe is English grammar.
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msg101912 - (view) |
Author: Brian Curtin (brian.curtin) * |
Date: 2010-03-30 02:24 |
I went through and made a lot of grammar corrections and rewording throughout the file. See attached patch.
I have no idea if this doc is technically correct. I only made grammar changes since I'm not a big web developer, but it could probably use a look from someone who is pretty knowledgeable on the topic.
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msg101913 - (view) |
Author: Éric Araujo (eric.araujo) * |
Date: 2010-03-30 02:43 |
I noticed that “a user” is “he” in the current text; gender-neutral
language may be more in conformity with the recent diversity statement.
Regards
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msg101914 - (view) |
Author: Brian Curtin (brian.curtin) * |
Date: 2010-03-30 02:48 |
My first patch removed a lot of the he/him/his wording, but now that you mentioned it found another one. Updated the patch.
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msg101917 - (view) |
Author: Aditya Bhargava (aditya.bhargava) |
Date: 2010-03-30 04:44 |
Another patch. This contains all the patches from Brian Curtin's issue8218_v3.diff patch along with more edits, including
an -> in
teh -> the
wordspushedtogether spaced out
unnecessary _a_ words _is_ taken out
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msg102052 - (view) |
Author: Ezio Melotti (ezio.melotti) * |
Date: 2010-04-01 01:41 |
There's also an invalid link to an image just after the title "The low-level view":
-.. .. image:: http.png
+.. image:: http.png
The image is not there though, and in r66294 only the document has been added.
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msg102053 - (view) |
Author: Éric Araujo (eric.araujo) * |
Date: 2010-04-01 01:44 |
This is a reST comment.
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msg102054 - (view) |
Author: Ezio Melotti (ezio.melotti) * |
Date: 2010-04-01 01:47 |
If the image is missing, then the whole line can be removed.
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msg102055 - (view) |
Author: Éric Araujo (eric.araujo) * |
Date: 2010-04-01 01:49 |
Is there a main author for this fileN? If so, they can say whether they left the link as a reminder to put the image back later, or if they were just afraid of real version control <0.4 wink>
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msg102056 - (view) |
Author: Ezio Melotti (ezio.melotti) * |
Date: 2010-04-01 01:52 |
The author is Marek Kubica, but he doesn't seem to be registered to this tracker.
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msg102287 - (view) |
Author: R. David Murray (r.david.murray) * |
Date: 2010-04-03 17:38 |
I do know something about web development, so I did a more extensive edit. I'm not saying I've brought it completely up to date or fixed any inaccuracies, but I did change the tone here and there, tightened up a bunch of the language, clarified a few things, and updated a few statements.
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msg102362 - (view) |
Author: Ezio Melotti (ezio.melotti) * |
Date: 2010-04-05 04:07 |
Fixed in r79781 (trunk), r79782 (release26-maint), r79783 (py3k) and r79784 (release31-maint).
Thanks to all!
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+ msg101896 title: typo currect -> Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto |
2010-03-29 16:24:55 | eric.araujo | set | nosy:
+ eric.araujo messages:
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2010-03-24 15:45:01 | LambertDW | set | messages:
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2010-03-24 01:50:02 | ezio.melotti | set | nosy:
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+ Python 2.6, Python 2.7, Python 3.2 priority: normal assignee: georg.brandl -> ezio.melotti resolution: accepted |
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